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此文突出的特点在于多方位点击题意。就“时尚”而言,初读文章,我们以为作者要写的就是城里人去乡下吃农家饭、品农家菜、看农家景这一时尚,如果仅就此构思成篇,当然也算不错的选择,至少是把“时尚”这个大概念合理地化小、落“实”了。而作家的匠心独运之处,则在于把农家游这一时尚同“与亲情相约也能成为一种时尚”的心愿有机地融为一体,从更新也更深的层面上体现出对精神生活方面的“时尚”的呼唤与追求。如此一来,作品自然就不同凡响了。写文章,“写什么”是第一要素,而“怎么写”同样相当重要。我们来看看作者是如何把“品味”的过程写得生动感人的。作者主要是采用了多种描写手段,比如,“他们站在屋前,手足无措地望着我们笑”;“父母却吃得少,一直在一旁笑眯眯地看着我们”。这几笔有关神态的细节,活现了父母的心理状态,读来耐人寻味。关于小羊的描写、关于摘紫茄子的
The prominent feature of this article is the multi-directional click problem. In the case of fashion, for the first time, we thought that the author wanted to write that the city people go to the countryside to eat peasant meals, farm products, and peasant families to see this fashion. Good choice, at least to “fashion ” This concept is reasonable to small, “” real. The writer's originality lies in the marriage of this fashion with “with the family can also be a fashion similar ” aspiration of the organic integration, from a newer and deeper level to reflect the spirit Life “fashion ” the call and the pursuit. As a result, the work naturally extraordinary. Writing articles, “writing what ” is the first element, and “how to write ” is also very important. Let's take a look at how the author wrote the process of “taste” vividly. The author mainly uses a variety of description means, for example, “” They stood in front of the house, carelessly looking at us smiling ; “Parents eat less, has been smiling at us and looked at us.” These few details on demeanor, live the psychological state of the parents, read thought-provoking. On the description of the lamb on the pick purple eggplant