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新材料作文时代,很多语文教师对作文题目中的材料不甚重视,或者分析不够深入,进而导致指导学生审题比较粗疏大意,写作训练往往似是而非,差之毫厘,谬以千里。先看看一道高三的作文训练题。【作文题目】阅读下面的材料,根据要求作文。英国的《太阳报》以“什么样的人最快乐”为题,举办了一次有奖征答活动,编辑们从八万多封来信中评出了四个最佳答案:来到海边,用沙子筑城堡的儿童;打好一盆水,为婴儿洗澡的母亲;作品完成了,吹着口哨的艺术家;历经千辛万苦后,挽救了病人的医生。
In the era of new material composition, many Chinese teachers did not pay much attention to the materials in the essay topic or did not analyze them sufficiently deeply. This led to the fact that the guidance of the students in examining the papers was rather careless. Writing training often seemed paradoxical, with the slightest difference and mistakes for thousands of miles. Take a look at a high school essay training questions. [Essay topic] Read the following materials, according to the requirements of composition. The British newspaper The Sun published a prize-giving campaign entitled “What is the happiest of people?”. The editors identified the four best answers from the over 80,000 letters they wrote: , Children building sand castles in sand; laying a pot of water, a mother bathing for a baby; an artist finished with a whistling sound; a doctor who saved the patient after many hardships.