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顾此失彼,是新闻写作中常见的毛病之一,也是编辑改稿的时候最需要小心的一个问题。某新闻单位招聘编辑、记者,针对这个问题,在复试卷中提出一类试题,要求应考者指出稿件中不妥或欠缺之处。下面是其中一个,是一封读者来信。编辑同志: 本月二十八日,我们从上海乘火车到南京,不久又从南京买票回陕西。南京站的售票员一听我们买十六张票,立即告诉我们:“上海火车站来电话,说有一位旅客在上海买了十六张票,多付了十元钱。”我们核对,果然如此。这位售票员当即给上海火车站打了电话。上海火车站的售票员王富荣等同志,不顾往返千里的辛苦,赶来南京,于二十九日中午,亲手把钱交给我们。上海火车站售票员同志这种全心全意为人民服务、对工作高度负责的精神是多么可贵啊!
It is one of the most common problems in journalistic writing and one of the most in need of caution when editing and revising manuscripts. A news agency hiring editors and reporters, in response to this problem, put forward a type of test questions in the re-examination paper, requiring candidates to point out the manuscript in the wrong or lacking. Here is one of them, a letter from a reader. Editor’s Comrade: On the 28th of this month, we took a train to Shanghai from Shanghai and soon returned to Nanjing from Nanjing. Nanjing Station’s ticket clerk heard us buy sixteen tickets and immediately told us: “Shanghai Railway Station called and said that one traveler bought sixteen tickets in Shanghai and paid ten more.” We checked and did so . The conductor immediately called Shanghai Railway Station. Shanghai Railway Station conductor Wang Furong and other comrades, regardless of the hard work and traveled thousands of miles, came to Nanjing, at noon on the 29th, personally handed the money to us. Shanghai Railway Station conductor comrades wholeheartedly serve the people, highly responsible for the spirit of the job is how valuable ah!