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这是1996年的事儿。北京市诗词学会在西山的一个大院儿里开会。作为报纸副刊的编辑,笔者应邀参加了这个会议。 这些年,有不少从工作岗位上离退休下来的老同志参加了诗词学会。这些同志为革命操劳多半生,现在从岗位上退下来,吟吟诗,写写字,安度晚年,是一件好事。然而,某些人在写诗填词的过程中,走上了歧路:他们成天陷在了诗词的格律里,写一首诗,把最大的精力放在了格律上,看合不合平仄,对仗是否工整,有没有拗句等。这样做的结果,是失去了诗歌最根本的东西:诗意。他们写出来的诗,缺少诗味,成了标语口号的堆砌,许多不该入诗的一些概
This is a 1996 thing. Beijing Poetry Society meeting in a large courtyard in Xishan. As editor of the newspaper supplement, I was invited to attend this meeting. In recent years, many old comrades who have retired from their posts have participated in the Poetry Society. These comrades have labored most of their lives for the revolution. Now it is a good thing to step down from their posts, and to chant poems, write and write letters, and live in peace in their late years. However, some people go down the wrong path in the process of writing poems: they are trapped in the law of poetry all day long, writing a poem, putting the greatest energy on the law, whether the match is flat or not Neat, there is no sentence and so on. The result of this is the loss of the most fundamental thing in poetry: poetic. They wrote the poem, the lack of poetic flavor, slogan became a pile of slogans, and many should not enter some of the poem