抽背书

• 作 者: 陈琦
• 机 构: 江苏省宜兴市实验小学城中校区四年(5)班,
• 出 处: 优秀作文选评(小学版)
• 发表日期: 2011年03期
• 关键词: 张老师 语言描写 一字一顿 小溪流 杨老师 陈振豪 无罪释放 文老师 指导教师 惯用手法

今天早读课,我们正读得投入。(开门见山。)突然,张老师拍了拍手,示意我们停下,要抽背书。张老师这招真够厉害,教室里的空气一下子凝固起来,同学们个个都吓得大惊失色,生怕有的地方背不出来,被老师批评、同学嘲笑。(描写好,开篇制造出紧张气氛,吸引人阅读。)抽背开始了,(过渡自然。)首先抽到的就是张佳希,她脸色苍白,从似乎沾了胶水的座位上慢吞吞地站了起来,拉了拉衣角,挠了挠头。(形

Today morning class, we are reading input. (Go straight to the point.) Suddenly, Teacher Zhang clapped his hands, signaling that we stopped and had to endorse the endorsement. Zhang teacher this move is really powerful, the air in the classroom suddenly solidified, all students are scared surprised, for fear that some places can not come back, was criticized by the teacher, students laughed at. (The description is good, the opening creates an atmosphere of tension, attractive reading.) Pumping back began, (transitional natural.) The first to get is Zhang Jiasi, she was pale, from the seat seemed to glue slowly stood Rising up, pulled the lacy corner scratched his head. (shape