让你的文章走出低分与平庸——阅卷归来话高考

• 作 者: 洪方煜
• 出 处: 小作家选刊
• 发表日期: 2004年期
• 关键词: 平淡无味 所见所感 写作技法 摇曳多姿 生存空间 历史人物 古典诗词 七贤 宿构 画面感

由于不少考生平时习惯于利用现成文章或材料,对生活缺少观察.思考与感悟,思维呆板,今年浙江卷仍出现了大量低分文章.概括起来主要有以下三种情况:一、记流水账主要有两种情形:一种是写城里人在乡村中一天的见闻.或者是乡下人上城一天的所见所感;另一种情况是记叙乡下或都市一年四季的景象。这两种形式都扣住了题意.却是平铺直叙.致使文章平淡无味。要改变这种情况.可增加一些写作技法。例如:1.变换时间。可采用倒叙.插叙等手

Because many candidates are usually accustomed to the use of off-the-shelf articles or materials, lack of observation of life thinking and perception, rigid thinking, there are still a lot of Zhejiang volume this year, there are still a lot of low-grade articles summary can be summarized as the following three conditions: There are two situations: one is to write about the day when people in the city are in town, or the day when the countryman is in the city, and the other is to write down scenes of the country or city all year round. Both of these forms have pinned the headline, but they have been tacitly illustrated, rendering the article plain and tasteless. To change this situation, add some writing skills. For example: 1. Change the time. Flashback can be used