我爱我家的“小心眼”

• 作 者: 杨雪飞
• 机 构: 河南许昌实验小学五(4)班,
• 出 处: 创新作文(小学版)
• 发表日期: 2011年06期
• 关键词: 我爱我家 文章语言 我自己 学校门口 给你 反喻 声地 塑料瓶装 子里

语文园地七习作要求:一个特点鲜明的人,总是给人留下深刻的印象,即使偶然见上一面,他(她)的音容笑貌、举手投足,也会留在心中挥之不去。这次习作,我们就来写这样一个人,可以是身边熟悉的人,也可以是偶然见到的陌生人。写的时候,试着运用课文中一些写人的方法,写出他(她)某一方面的特点。写完以后,同学之间互相评一评,改一改,让人物特点更加突出。

Language garden seven exercises Requirements: a distinctive person, always impressed people, even if the chance to see the one above, his (her) somber, gestures, will stay in the hearts of lingering. This exercise, we come to write such a person, can be familiar with people around, it can be a chance to see strangers. At the time of writing, try to write some of his (her) characteristics by using some of the writing methods in the text. After the writing, students comment on each other, change, to make the characters more prominent.