着眼“醉”字 写深写透

• 作 者: 叶光鑫
• 出 处: 优秀作文选评(小学版)
• 发表日期: 2012年Z1期
• 关键词: 醉了 言行举止 幽默风趣 猫步 尿来 上拱 细描 令人

【病文入院】在老妈嘴里,老爸和小弟是“宝一对”。一天,老妈出门买有事,老爸闲得无聊,便喝起酒来。老爸灌下五瓶啤酒,醉了。后来,不知怎么了,他竟嫌不过瘾,拉上五岁的小弟,对吹起来。只一会儿,这“宝一对”便把家里闹腾得乌烟瘴气。后来,老爸拉着小弟爬上床,两人在床上玩开了。我终于忍不住了,便说了他们几句。谁料,老爸竟撒孩子似的撒起娇来。不知过了多长时间,家里总算安静了下来。这一对活宝!叫人彻底无语。

【Disease admission】 In my mom mouth, father and brother are “treasure a pair ”. One day, Mom went out to buy things, dad bored, they drank wine. Dad poured five bottles of beer, drunk. Later, I do not know how, he actually is not fun, pull the five-year-old brother, to blow up. Only a moment, this “treasure a pair ” put the home naughty nasty. Later, dad pulled his brother climbed into bed, the two played in bed. I finally could not stand it, they said a few words. Unexpectedly, dad actually sprinkle childish like sown. I do not know how long, at home finally quiet down. This pair of live treasure!