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一感人的一幕【审题】本题的关键词在于“感人”和“一幕”。“感人”即人心灵受到感动,另一个关键词“一幕”是审题的重点和难点。所谓一幕,应该是一个场景、一个画面,这幅场景画面,将故事的内容和作者的情感都推到了高潮,从而达到了感动以至于催人泪下的境界。这部分内容应该是一个特写镜头,让时间和画面定格住,通过细节的刻画达到不仅感动作者,更要感动读者的效果。可以说,“一幕”写得好不好是文章成功与否的关键。【立意】“感人”可以是被人间真情所打动,也可以是为人的精神品质所震撼而产生的感动,甚至不一定是
A touching scene [trial] The key words of this question is “touching ” and “scene ”. “Touching ” that is, people’s hearts are touched, another keyword “scene ” is the focus and difficulty of the trial. The so-called scene, it should be a scene, a picture, this scene screen, the content of the story and the author’s emotions have been pushed to the climax, so as to reach the moving realm of tears. This part of the content should be a close-up, so that the time and the picture freeze, through the portrayal of the details reached not only touched the author, but also to move the reader’s effect. It can be said that the “scene ” is a good writing is the key to the success of the article. [Conception] “touching ” can be impressed by the truth of the world, it can also be caused by the shock of the spiritual quality of people, and may not even be