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春天的风是温柔的妈妈,给大地轻柔又温暖的拥抱,小花小草都笑了。夏天的风是调皮的娃娃,最爱玩捉迷藏,人们满头大汗却找不到它。秋天的风是力气大的爸爸,扯下了片片树叶,铺得大地一片金黄。冬天的风是生气的爷爷,呼呼地发着脾气,吓得小河披上了盔甲。点评:用童心看世界,世界原来那么可爱。这篇习作以儿童的视角展现着孩子对四季的风的感受与体验。语言并不华丽,但正是这种朴素给读者呈现了一个真实的童心世界。
The spring wind is a gentle mother, give the earth a soft and warm hug, flowers and grass are laughing. The summer wind is naughty doll, the most love to play hide and seek, people sweaty but could not find it. The autumn wind is a great father, pulling off leaves, paving the ground a golden. Winter wind is angry grandfather, whistling hair, scared Creek put on armor. Comments: With innocence to see the world, the world was so cute. This essay shows children’s feeling and experience of the seasons of the wind from a child’s point of view. The language is not gorgeous, but it is this simplicity that presents readers with a true childlike world.