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一、书面表达题回顾假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。(满分25分)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。二、学生范文呈现作文编号:100202828三、作文评析(一)作文亮点1.结构完整,层次分明。第一段开头介绍写作目的,第二、三段陈述自己遇到的问题以及请求帮助的具体方面,第四段表达期盼及感谢之情。四段
First, the written expression of review assume that you are Li Hua, summer vacation want to go to a foreign trade company part-time, has written an application and resume (resume). Write a letter to Ms Jenkins, a foreign teacher, and ask her to change the text and format of the accompanying materials. (Out of 25 points) Note: 1. The number of words around 100; 2 can be appropriate to increase the details, so that coherent writing. Second, students Pham Van presentation number: 100202828 Third, essay evaluation (a) writing highlights 1. Structure is complete, structured. The first paragraph begins with a description of the purpose of writing. The second and third paragraphs state the problems they encounter and the specific aspects of the request for help. The fourth paragraph expresses hope and gratitude. Four paragraphs