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得分亮点:层次清晰,内容丰富并不一定要所有人都去当英雄,因为我们需要有人为英雄鼓掌。坐在路边鼓掌,其实也挺好。(开门见山,表明观点)坐在路边鼓掌,是一种义务。英雄已让你感动过,那么你的掌声便是对英雄的回报,是应尽的义务。我们承担的任务虽小,却是不可或缺,就像税收。交税是身为公民的我们的义务,为的是我们的英雄,祖国经济的发展,让她拥有更加坚定的步伐,更刚强的勇气,以屹立于世界。我们,便是她坚强的后盾。英雄与观众的关系从来都不可分,没有了观众,何来英雄?(辩证地认识问题,思维有深度)尽好义务,让英雄更加出彩!
Scoring highlights: clear level, rich content does not necessarily mean that everyone should be a hero, because we need someone to applaud the heroes. Sitting on the roadside applause, in fact, quite good. (Go straight to the top of the mountain, indicating the point of view) Sitting on the roadside applause is an obligation. Heroes have touched you, then your applause is the return of the hero, it is due obligations. The tasks we undertake are small but indispensable, like taxes. Taxation is our obligation as a citizen. For the sake of our heroes and the economic development of the motherland, she has a steadier pace and a stronger courage to survive in the world. Us, is her strong backing. The relationship between the hero and the audience has always been inseparable, without the audience, how to hero? (Dialectical understanding of the problem, depth of thinking) to do our best to make the hero even more outstanding!