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读完《樱花毯》,我可以断定雪冰是极具潜力的小作家了。理由有两点:一是作品富有诗意,樱花树下的女孩,女孩心中的樱花毯,都是多么美好的画面和想象呀!再加上那些灵动的语言,一开头就把人带入了如诗如画的情景之中。细看文中,可圈可点之处很多,“热情中略带点少女的娇羞”、“像铺上一层淡粉色的雪”是表现樱花的静态美;“玩累了,风才放开手,让花瓣慢慢落在地上”是表现樱花的动态美;“用樱心中的动的语中,可铺上一放开手读完《樱花毯》理由有两点:一读了。理
After reading ”Sakura blanket“, I can conclude that snow ice is a great potential writer. There are two reasons: First, the poetic works, the cherry tree under the cherry blossoms in the hearts of girls blanket, are so beautiful picture and imagination! Coupled with those smart language, at the beginning brought people into such as Among the picturesque scenes. Look at the text, a lot of remarkable, ”passionate little girl shy“, ”like a layer of pale pink snow “ is the performance of the static beauty of cherry; ”play tired , The wind was let go, let the petals slowly fall on the ground “is the dynamic beauty of the performance of cherry; ” with the heart of the cherry in the moving language, can be put on a free hand to read “Sakura blanket” for two reasons Point: First read