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写小动物很容易落入俗套,什么“它长着一双黑亮亮的眼睛”“毛茸茸的好可爱”等。其实,通过动作来表现动物的可爱,比纯粹的外貌描写要生动得多。另外,记录下你和它们之间记忆深刻的故事,写出真实感情,就自然能吸引读者的眼球!原来的作文我以前养过一只叫“乖乖”的仓鼠。它和我之间发生过很多事情。乖乖是我小时候养的,刚买来时它静静地躺在笼子里,很乖,所以我给它取名叫“乖乖”。其实它只是白天乖,晚上,我们就被
Writing small animals easily fall into the stereotypes, what “It has a pair of black and bright eyes ” “furry cute” and so on. In fact, through the action to show the animal’s cute, than the pure appearance description to be much more vivid. In addition, it is natural for you to record the true story of the memorable stories between you and them, and you will naturally be able to attract the reader’s attention! The original essay I used to have is a hamster called “obediently”. There have been a lot of things between it and me. Obediently I was raised when I was young, just bought it quietly lying in a cage, very good, so I named it “obediently.” In fact, it is only good daytime, at night, we were