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假期里,王语雷老师给同学们上了一堂作文课,讲的是如何进行场面描写。■课堂引导前额有台想象牌电视师:说到这个场面描写,估计同学们在学校里都是练习过的,现在找一位同学说说,都写过哪些和场面描写相关的作文?生:我们写过《记一场精彩的篮球比赛》。生:我也练过《记一次班级大扫除》。师:我想问问大家,是否还记得,老师当时是怎样引导大家,从哪个角度进入到这扇作文的大门的呢?关于场面描写,那就好像是天上的星星,数不胜数,而关于场面描写的方法也是各有所长。今天,我们就着重从后两
During the holidays, Wang Lei teacher gave classmates a class, is about how to describe the scene. ■ class guide front forehead imagination licensing TV: Speaking of this scene description, it is estimated that students are practicing in school, and now to find a classmate to say, have written about what the scene description of the composition? Students: We wrote “Remember a wonderful basketball game.” Students: I also practiced “remember a class cleaning.” Teacher: I would like to ask everyone whether it still remembers how the teacher led everyone at the time and from what angle came to the door of the composition? As for the description of the scene, it seems like there are numerous stars in the sky, The methods are also their own strengths. Today, we focus on the latter two