让作文语言新起来

• 作 者: 郑昌松
• 机 构: 安徽省霍邱县分水闸中学 237475
• 出 处: 语文天地
• 发表日期: 2002年12期
• 关键词: 摄影术 自我解嘲 思想政治课 批评教育 使人 褒词贬用 变式 人魔 生活用语 思维能力

一、精心锤炼词语要使作文语言新颖脱俗,鲜明生动,必须注重锤炼字词,尤其要重视对动词和形容词的锤炼。如:“低垂的天幕压着我的胸口,灰暗和沮丧撕裂着我的心。”“我们伟大祖国的形象第一次在我心灵的胶片上感光。”前句中“撕裂”一词毕现了苦闷无助,失落伤痛,仿佛心叶被一点点地撕扯开,流淌着殷红的血的情景。句中那灵动的文笔,神奇的表达效果,均仰仗于动词的灵巧运用;后句中的“感光”这一摄影术

First, meticulously tempering words to make the composition of the language novel, vivid and vivid, we must focus on tempering words, in particular, we should attach importance to the tempering of verbs and adjectives. Such as: “The low hanging ceiling is pressing on my chest, and my heart is gray and depressed.” “The image of our great motherland was sensitive to the film on my soul for the first time.” The word is full of depression and helplessness, loss of pain, as if the heart was slightly tearing open, flowing red blood scene. The smart writing and magical expression in the sentence all depend on the dexterous use of verbs;