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有人说,评阅高考作文犹如在黑夜里寻找光明,这个比喻真是太妙了!考场作文如果没有月亮的光华,有些闪烁的星星也算不错;如果没有星星,能够放飞几只萤火虫也蛮可爱的;可如果连萤火虫也没有,那真是漆黑一片了!高考阅卷经验告诉我们,基础等级的50分,内容与语言表达各占一半,而发展等级的10分则往往偏向语言表达。纵观近年高考满分作文,或用修辞展现魅力,或从诗词歌赋里巧借文采,或于哲理感悟中尽显智慧,语言无不异彩纷呈。毫不夸张地说,语言表达水平直接影响作文的评分。在《考试大纲》发展等级的要求中,“有文采”包含“词语生动”“句式灵活”“善于运用修辞手法”“文句有意蕴”四个评分点。在这四个得分点中,容易操作、效果鲜明的是
Some people say that reviewing the college entrance examination composition is like finding the light in the darkness. This metaphor is really wonderful! If there is no brilliance of the moon in the examination room composition, some flashing stars are also considered to be good; if there are no stars, it is also very cute to be able to fly several fireflies; But even if there are no fireflies, it’s really dark! The experience of college entrance examination and scoring tells us that 50 points for the basic level, content and language expression each account for half, while the development level of 10 points is often biased toward language expression. Taking a look at recent college entrance examinations out of essay writing, or using rhetoric to show charm, or borrowing literary talent from poetry and poetry, or philosophizing, the language is full of splendor. It is no exaggeration to say that the level of language expression directly affects the score of the composition. In the “Examination Outline” development level requirements, “literary ” contains“ vivid ” “sentence”“” is good at using rhetorical devices “” sentence meaning " four scoring points . Among the four scoring points, easy to use and effective