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再没有比含糊、罗嗦的语言更倒人胃口的了。请看:在中国文学史上,南宋最杰出的爱国诗人陆游,是创作辛勤而且流传的作品最丰富的一个作家。他活到八十五岁才去世。据清代著名学者沈德潜统计,陆游“六十年间诗万首”后,外加四千余首。后世都流传陆游“日课一诗”的佳话。这段话的第一句,又是“诗人”,又是“作家”;“是”这个分句,词语堆砌,没法念;“据”字句,一“后”一“外”,不合逻辑;“后世都流传”,也不通。诸如此类不准确、不简洁的毛病,在学生习作中几乎可以随手拈来,在公开的出版物中也不乏其例。写文章,是用书面语言表达一定的思想、意向和感情的。怎样才能表达好,是一门深奥的学问,也是
There is no more appetite than a vague, eloquent language. Please read: In the history of Chinese literature, Lu You, the most outstanding patriotic poet of the Southern Song Dynasty, is one of the most authoritative and hard-working writers. He died before reaching the age of eighty-five. According to Shen Deqian, a well-known scholar of the Qing Dynasty, Lu You’s “more than 10,000 poems in 60 years” plus 4,000 more. Later generations have circulated Lu Yu’s episode of “a poem for a day”. The first sentence of this passage is also a “poet” and a “writer”; the clause “is” and words are piled up and can’t be read; “words” and “after” and “outside” are illogical. ;“After the rumors are circulating”, it is not pass. Such inaccuracies and inconsistencies can almost be picked up in students’ work. There are also many cases in public publications. Writing articles is the use of written language to express certain ideas, intentions and feelings. How to express it well is a profound knowledge and it is also