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用色彩来作“精神”的载体,这很有特点。全文有五种“精神”及其色彩载体是十分贴切的。但是,有两种色彩——黄色激励我们勇攀高峰,不断进取;橙色代表着亲情,弘扬人文道德——还未从“色彩”中找到其所承载“精神”的植根点。用排比段结构文章,很容易写成大路货;此文未落俗套的原因是,最后用“一朵小花”收住了全文内容。不过,最稳妥的办法是,只用一种色彩来承载某一种“精神”——内容将会更集中。此文可变格为几篇主旨不相同的出彩作文。
Using color as a carrier of “spirituality” is very characteristic. There are five kinds of “spirits” and their color carriers in the full text. However, there are two colors—yellow encourages us to climb the peak and keep forging ahead; orange represents family affection and promotes humanistic morality—it has not yet found the root of its “spirituality” from “color”. It is easy to write large road goods with the paragraph structure article. The reason why the article was unconventional is that it was finally accepted as a “small flower”. However, the most prudent way is to carry only one “spirit” in one color - the content will be more concentrated. This article can be changed into several essays that are not the same.