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自从写完《长城》一诗,我就爱上了写诗,于是又一首诗诞生了。深夜叩门经棕榈,阴下繁叶高高举。棕叶不比枫叶丽,只是无惧风和雨。【点评】古体诗创作,首重立意。棕榈为常见之木,我校中便有栽种,然棕榈人人可见,此诗却非人人可写。况新杭入学不过四载,腹中却有诗书,尤为难得。据悉“深夜叩门”乃化用“拄杖无时夜叩门”而来,学而能用,令人赞赏。
Since I wrote a poem in the Great Wall, I fell in love with writing poetry, so another poem was born. Knocking at the palm of the house late at night, under the leafy high leaves. Brown leaves than Maple Leaf, but no fear of wind and rain. 【Comments】 ancient poetry creation, the first important conception. Palm is a common wood, there is planted in our school, but everyone can see the palm, the poem is not everyone can write. Condition of Hangzhou new school but four contained, but there is a poem in the abdomen, especially rare. It is reported that “late-night knock ” is the use of “Zhuzhang no time night knocking ” come, learn and can be used, it is admirable.