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一、两篇作文评价的调查在一次以“青春关键词”为话题的作文训练中,我随机抽取了2篇作文,请部分语文老师根据自己的标准进行打分(总分60分),再请全班同学根据自己的标准进行打分,结果发现差距很大。请看下面的作文:在水一方高一(3)班应琳琳蒹葭苍苍,白露为霜。所谓伊人,在水一方。——题记冷落凄清的季节,烟水迷离的湖畔,我彷徨地徘徊着。湖对岸的你,宛如一位佩着翡翠镯子的少女,如玉般温润莹澈,清丽优雅,更如玉般可碎而不可亵。你——我的梦想。曾经多少次,我望着你在我的梦里低吟
One or two surveys of composition evaluation conducted a composition training on the topic of “youth keywords”. I randomly selected 2 compositions, and asked some language teachers to score according to their own standards (total score 60 points). Then ask the class to score according to their own standards. The results show a wide gap. Please see the following composition: In the water, one class (3) should be Linlin, pale, and white. The so-called Iraqis are on the water side. ——The cold and clear season of the inscription, the lake with the blurred water, and I groan. On the other side of the lake, you are like a young girl wearing an emerald bracelet. It is like a jade, warm and cheesy. It is elegant and elegant. It is more like a jade than a girl. You - my dream. How many times have I been watching you gloomy in my dreams?