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上期“图图话话堡”栏目给出的四幅图简单明了,小朋友们一看就懂。虽然故事情节简单,可要写得出色,就没那么容易了,需要你在描写人物语言、心理话动方面多下功夫哟!来看看这次征稿选出的两篇写话有哪些特点吧!放学了!放学了!笑笑背着小书包,开心地走在回家的路上。她一会儿追蝴蝶,一会儿学小鸟叫,一会儿又蹲在地上和蚂蚁说话,边走边玩。忽然,笑笑的脚下滚来一个黄澄澄的大鸭梨。她往前一看,一位老奶奶正手忙脚乱地捡掉在地上的鸭梨呢!笑笑连忙跑过去给老奶奶帮忙。鸭梨都捡起来了,可是盛鸭梨的塑料袋
In the previous issue, the four pictures given in the “Tutu Fortress” column are simple and clear, and the children can understand at a glance. Although the plot is simple, you can write well, not so easy, you need to describe the language of the character, the psychological words and efforts to make more efforts! Take a look at the writing of the two selected articles written by the characteristics of it After school! After school! Smile carrying a small bag, happy to go home on the road. She chased the butterflies for a while, learned little birds for a while, then squatted on the ground and talked to the ants while walking and playing. Suddenly, smiled at the foot roll a yellow pear big pear. She looked forward, a grandma is scrambling to pick up the pear on the ground it! Smile ran quickly to the grandmother to help. Pear picked up, but Sheng pear pear plastic bags