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失误诊断考试失,利这或许是不少同学都遇到过的问。题本文借助奶奶制作包子这一过,程来引出自己对挫折的感,悟构思较为独。特纵观全,文故事讲述清,楚语言通顺自,然结构安排也较为合,理就是读来缺少了几分吸引。力据,此本文最后评为二类下等。文细细探,究失误主要表现在叙述方式。上也就是,说考生只懂得讲述故事情,节不会巧妙地表。达就文章而,言失败之后的心、理制作包子的过、程蒸煮包子的情景以及包子出笼时的画,面均是大有文章可做,的可考生不是一笔带,过便是寻常叙,说几乎看不到一个精彩的细节描。写升格,时若能在细节上做文,章效果自然会不同一般。
Missing diagnosis exam, Lee this may be a lot of students have encountered the question. This article with the grandmother buns made this time, Cheng came to his own sense of frustration, Wu concept is more unique. Special overview of the entire article tells the story clear, Chu language fluent, of course, the structural arrangement is more appropriate, reason is to read the lack of a bit attractive. According to force, this article was last rated as second-class. Fine-tuning, research errors mainly in the narrative. That is, that the candidates only know how to tell the story, the festival will not be clever. Up to the article, after the failure of the heart, reason for the production of steamed stuffed buns, steamed stuffed dumplings and steamed buns when the paintings come out of the scene, there are a lot of articles can be done, the examinee is not a band, the passing is unusual Syria, said almost can not see a wonderful detail description. When you write an escalation, if you can make a fuss about the details, the effect of the chapter will naturally be different.