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历年来的教学实践表明,学生在记叙文中的毛病,主要存在三个方面的问题:一是思路混乱,观点有错误;二是内容空洞,写不具体;三是罗列材料,平铺直叙,没有重点,不会剪裁.这些缺点,只能对症下药,把毛病指出来,让学生自己修改,下面分别举例谈明.1、关于思路混乱、观点错误例如,有一篇作文这样写道.这个学期,我班的同学都是来自各校的尖子.我忧心忡忡,我不能象以往那
The teaching practice over the years has shown that students have three problems in narrative texts: First, confusion of ideas and mistakes in viewpoints; second, empty content, writing is not specific; thirdly, materials are listed, straightforward and straightforward, and there is no focus. Will not be tailored. These shortcomings, can only prescribe the right medicine, to point out the problems, let the students modify themselves, the following are examples to explain. 1, on the clutter of ideas, wrong views For example, there is a essay written this way. This semester, my class The classmates are all from the top schools. I am worried, I can’t be like that