“炸”出来的惊喜

• 作 者: 叶荣宇 叶特愉
• 机 构: 福建省厦门市同安区第二实验小学五(1)班,福建省厦门市同安区第二实验小学,
• 出 处: 小星星(高年级版)
• 发表日期: 2015年09期
• 关键词: 兴趣班 炸薯条 齿颊留香 告诉我 白萝卜 金薯 嗡嗡声 大后 油烧 切条

星期日下午,风和日丽,难得不用上兴趣班,我兴致勃勃地想:做点儿什么好呢?对了,为妈妈炸出一个超级大惊喜——油炸薯条!事不宜迟,我决定马上行动!【开头能简洁地交代事情的起因,写得好!】为了不暴露计划,我使用金蝉脱壳之计:“老妈,我出去玩玩,半个小时就回来。可以吗?”“荣宇,等下!”没等我后脚跨出门槛,老妈就叫住了我,挥手示意我留下。难道她看出我的计谋了,想

On Sunday afternoon, I was blinded by the wind and never had to go to the fun class. I was very excited to think, “What are you doing?” Yes, I burst a big surprise for my mom - fried fries! Decided to act now! 【The beginning can concisely explain the cause of the matter, well written!】 In order not to expose the plan, I use the act of cicadas shelling: “Mom, I go out to play, back in half an hour. ”“ Rong Yu, wait for the next! ”Did not wait for my hind foot to cross the threshold, the mother stopped me, waved me to leave. Does she see my trick, think