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此文“漏”字引领全文。第三自然段“这水库里的水是天上漏下来的”中的“漏”字——悬疑；第四自然段“走过”,第五自然段“走上”——探寻；第六自然段“发现几条细细的涓流是从乱石堆里流淌出来的”中的“淌”字照应开头的“漏”字——似乎探明；第七自然段“下山”发现“她卑微,不起眼,却自有她的神秘”——真正探明“平凡中有其独特的魅力”或“独特的魅力蕴含在平凡中”——升华主旨。此文主旨多元,其基本材料有利于写出变格作文。如果变格为“探索”话题作文,其变格的措施是：移步换行写水库源头；变格后作文标题为“大山寺水库之源”。
The word “leakage” leads the full text. The third paragraph “The water in this reservoir is a leak in the sky,” the “leakage” word - suspense; the fourth paragraph of nature “walked through”, the fifth natural paragraph “go on” - exploration; sixth natural The word “淌” in the paragraph “discovering a few thin turbulences flowing from the piles of rocks” looks after the word “leakage” at the beginning – it seems to be proved; the seventh paragraph “downhill” finds that “she is humble. It is inconspicuous, but it has its own mystery - to really prove that “in the ordinary there is its unique charm” or “unique charm is contained in the ordinary” - the theme of sublimation. The main purpose of this article is multiple, and its basic material is conducive to writing a distorted composition. If the variable is “probing” topic essay, the measures to change it are: move to write the source of the reservoir; after the change, the essay titled “The source of the Dashansi Reservoir”.