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农村小学生生活在广阔美丽的大自然中,在田野中他们渡过了无数快乐的时光,看到了无数美丽的风景和奇特的景像,在学校里他们也有丰富多彩的校园生活,可是让他们写这些他们看到的景和见过的事,却是提笔茫然,开篇艰难。开口说,比用笔写要容易些,让他们先说再写,效果稍好一点,勉强成文,但也是语言苦涩,干巴巴的,没有修饰,没有文采。造成这种现象,原因何在呢?原因众多,首先是缺乏细致的观察。生活中不缺乏美,缺乏的是发现,生活是写作的
Rural primary school students live in vast and beautiful nature, where they spend countless happy hours in the fields, see countless beautiful scenery and peculiar scenes, and they also have colorful campus life in school, but let them write these What they have seen and what they have seen is a dilemma and a difficult opening. Saying it easier than writing with a pen, letting them say it again and again, the effect is a little better, barely written, but also the language is bitter, dry, no modification, no literary talent. What are the reasons for this phenomenon? There are many reasons, first and foremost, the lack of careful observation. Lack of beauty in life, the lack of discovery, life is writing