“千金作文”评选后记

• 出 处: 初中生
• 发表日期: 2013年35期
• 关键词: 向往之情 编辑手记 感受力 郭仪 作家协会会员 湖南教育报刊社 生活细节 文字能力 副社长 家国

总编点评《告别年少》,是作者的告别之歌,也是一篇青春宣言。作者对自己年少时的毛病,比如叛逆,比如撒谎,比如意气用事,作了无情的剖析。作者的高明之处在于,在揭示自己的“幼稚”时,写了父母的体贴、关爱以及谆谆告诫,形成一种鲜明的对照,以促使自己获得一种成长的力量。结尾一段,虽只简短两句,但收束有力,对未来的向往之情跃然纸上。《你的尖锐让我记住了你》,是作者解读鲁迅先生的心灵之作。作者写了小时候对鲁迅先生的误读,直至中学时读了鲁迅先生的大量作品,才对其有了中肯的认识。这种认识,也与心灵的日益成熟

Editor-in-Chief Comment “Farewell to the younger,” is the author’s farewell song, but also a youth declaration. The author made a merciless analysis of his own childhood problems, such as rebellion, such as lying, such as humble. The cleverness of the author is that, in revealing his “childish ”, he wrote his parents’ thoughtfulness, care and admonition, forming a sharp contrast to promote oneself to a growth force. The end of a paragraph, although only a brief two sentences, but a strong bundle of desire for the future vividly on the paper. “Your sharpness reminds me of you” is the author’s interpretation of Mr. Lu Xun’s soul. The author wrote a child’s misunderstanding of Mr. Lu Xun, until high school was read a large number of works by Mr. Lu Xun before they have a fair understanding. This understanding, but also with the growing maturity of the soul