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【名师画板】氛围的渲染,有助于激发人物的心情。就本文而言,要写好两处细节:一是写好烛光点燃后,餐厅与往日的不同之处,定会让每一人惊喜,达到激发人物心情的目的;二是写好就餐时场面描写,为烘托人物的心情埋下伏笔。【习作原色】烛光晚餐文★张溪芮今天晚上,①我们小学的教学楼突然停电了,张主任告诉我们晚上到初中部上自习。②我带着疑惑走进了食堂。心想:③食堂也不会有电啊,为什么还来啊?正在我想的④出神时,眼前的一片红光拉回了我的思绪,我定睛一看,原来是
[Teacher drawing board] atmosphere of the rendering, help to inspire people’s mood. For this article, to write two details: First, write the candlelight lit, the restaurant with the past differences will certainly make everybody surprise, to stimulate people’s mood to achieve the purpose; the second is to write a good meal scene description , To set the mood for the contraption. [Original color] Candlelight Dinner ★ Zhang Xi Rui tonight, ① a sudden power outage in our primary school teaching building, Director Zhang told us to go to the middle school at night to study. ② I walked into the canteen with my doubts. I thought: ③ canteen there will be no electricity ah, why come ah? In my thinking ④ disheartened, in front of a red pull back my thoughts, I take a closer look, the original is