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对于写作,王鼎钧先生曾有十分精到的见解,他说:“写作,就是把内在语言转换成书面语言。为什么要这么做呢?因为我们要表达。表达是一种快乐,一种成就,一种权力,不能表达是一种痛苦。”~([1])可看看我们的学生,真正把课堂写作当作乐事的又有几人?究其原因,长期以来,削足适履的习作教学,让酣畅淋漓的快意表达变成了情势所迫的生搬硬造,我们总是急功近利地希望在一次习作中改变学生文章中存在的所有问题,而给出的解决问题的“处方”却是诸如“描写不够具体”之类的
For the writing, Mr. Wang Dingjun had a very good idea, he said: “Writing, is the internal language into written language .Why do we do? Because we want to express .Is a happy, an achievement, A kind of power, can not express is a kind of pain. ”~ ([1]) can look at our students, the real classroom writing as a few happy people? The reason, for a long time, practicing teaching , So hearty expressive expression into the situation forced forced students to move, we always eagerly hope that in an exercise to change all the problems in student articles, and given the problem-solving “prescription It is such as ”description is not specific enough " and the like