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“春天像刚落地的娃娃,从头到脚都是新的,它生长着。”“春天像小姑娘,花枝招展的,笑着,走着。”“春天像健壮的青年,有铁一般的胳膊和腰脚,领着我们上前去。”这是朱自清先生《春》中的句子,用来强调春天“新、美、力”的特征。在作文教学中,我们不妨也以此为参照标准:以“新”作为文章题材的标准,用“美”作为文章语言的标准,把“力”作为文章主题的标准。这种从作文的外延和内涵上建立起来的较为合理的标准,可以用来规范、指导学生的写作,使写作教学有
“Spring is just like the doll that has just been touched down, it is new from head to toe, it grows. ” “Spring is like a little girl with beautiful flowers, smiling, walking.” “Spring is like a strong youth, Iron arm and waist, leading us forward. ”This is the sentence from Mr. Zhu Ziqing’s“ Spring, ”which emphasizes the characteristics of spring“ new, beautiful and powerful. ” In composition teaching, we may as well take this as the reference standard: “new ” as the standard of the article theme, “beauty ” as the standard of the article language, “force ” as the standard of the article theme. This kind of more reasonable criterion established from the extension and connotation of the composition can be used to standardize and guide the writing of the students so that the writing teaching has