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读学生的作文,有这样的感受:学生的文章无论长短,是否情词兼美,都是他们用笔来耕耘心田的大地,说自己想说的话。叶圣陶老先生曾经说过“我们不能只思索作文的法度、技术等问题,而不去管文字的原料——思想情感等问题。”这就说明,给学生作文写评语,绝不能蜻蜓点水,浮光掠影,甚至是用“放之四海而皆准”的万能评语,为了使学生作文水平进一步得到提高,我尝试着改革学生作文中的评语,让人性化、情趣化、科学化的评语替代老套、呆板的评语,收效很大。
Students read the composition, there is such a feeling: regardless of the length of the student’s article, whether the love and the United States, are they use the pen to cultivate the heart of the earth, say what they want to say. Mr. Ye Shengtao once said: “We can not only think about the essay’s method and technique, but not on the raw material of the essay, such as the emotion of the mind.” This shows that when writing a commentary to a student’s writing, we should never be superficial. In order to further improve students ’composition level, I try to reform the comments in students’ composition so as to make humanized, sentimental and scientific comment replace Old-fashioned, rigid comments, great results.