各放异彩 同见工力——读包婺平、包婺安的两篇散文

• 作 者: 过传忠
• 机 构: 上海教育电视台 《诗情画意》主持人,语文特级教师 上海市特约教育督导员
• 出 处: 中文自修
• 发表日期: 1998年02期
• 关键词: 太平湖 谋篇布局 语文特级教师 卒章显志 教育电视台 意志品格 黄卷青灯 砚湖 七八 奉献精神

读《寂寞太平湖》和《芳草》后,读者怕都会异口同声地说:真是双胞胎的姐妹作,太相像了。其实,这评价有失公允,就这两篇散文的本身而言,还是自有特色、各放异彩的。在构思立意、谋篇布局上,《寂寞太平湖》以“雾中看花”的写法,

After reading “Lonely Taiping Lake” and “Fragrant Grass,” readers are afraid that they will all say in unison: “It is a twin sister’s work. It is too similar.” In fact, this assessment is unfair. As far as these two prose items are concerned, they still have their own characteristics and they shine brilliantly. In terms of conception and planning, the “Lonely Taiping Lake” is written in the way of “seeing flowers in the fog”.