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同学们自从学习作文以来,老师经常提到的一个要求便是“写具体”。这是因为:①“写具体”是一篇文章的基本要求之一;②不少同学的文章常常达不到“写具体”的要求。下面用一些比较浅显的例子再给同学们谈一谈“写具体”。比如有一个很小很小的火车站,但是火车站的工作人员却并不因为这个站很小就对工作马马虎虎,他们对工作很认真,很负责,效果也很好。你们看,这个材料多值得我们去写呀。可是怎么写呢?就用刚才的那几句话能行吗?显然不行。为什么?因为刚才那几句话一点儿也不具体,读者既看不到这个小站如何“小”,更看不到这
One of the most frequently asked by teachers since writing lessons has been “writing specific.” This is because: ① “writing specific” is one of the basic requirements of an article; ② many students' articles often fail to “write specific” requirements. Here are some more simple examples to give students talk about writing specific. For example, there is a small and very small train station, but the train station staff did not because of this small station on the job so-so, they are serious and responsible work, the effect is also very good. You see, this material is worth us to write it. But how to write it? Just use those few words to do it? Clearly not. Why? Because just a few words that are not specific, the reader can not see this station how “small”, but can not see this