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如今路上的汽车来往不断,交通事故也接二连三。(开门见山,直接引入话题“交通事故”。)有一次,我在路上亲眼看到了一场交通事故:一位年轻人被撞得头破血流,横躺在地上一动不动。汽车不但撞了人,还撞到了护栏上,车头撞得面目全非。(观察仔细,写出自己的所见,抓住年轻人与汽车等。写出交通事故的严重性。)后来我听路过的行人说,司机酒后驾车,才导致这场事故的发生。看着这情景,我心里
Now the car on the road constantly, traffic accidents are also one after another. (Go straight to the point and lead directly to the topic “Traffic Accident.”) Once I saw a traffic accident on the road: a young man was crashed into tears, lying on the ground motionless. The car hit not only people, but also hit the fence, the front hit completely beyond recognition. (Watch carefully, write your own opinion, seize the young and the car, etc. Write down the seriousness of the traffic accident.) Later, I listened to the passing pedestrians who said that driving was the cause of the accident. Looked at this scene, my heart