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点评这是一篇带有议论文色彩的散文,主要表达了作者把“无情岁月”过成“有味诗”的观点。文章从回忆入手,接着写对生活的理解和认识,再扩展到今天应具备的生活态度。文字精美,诗意盎然。如果文中的思考再多一份理性,论证的逻辑性再强一些,文章的整体水平将更高。(周正梅)亲爱的老师、同学们:大家好!十分激动于毕业三十周年后再相聚于此。三十年的时光,转瞬即逝,仿佛眼前还是军训时大
Comment This is an essay with argumentative essay, mainly expresses the author’s point of view of “relentless years ” into “sour taste ” point of view. The article starts from the memory, then writes about the understanding and understanding of life, and then extends to the life attitude that should have today. Words beautiful, poetic. If there is more rational thinking in the text, the logic of argumentation will be stronger and the overall level of the article will be even higher. (Zhou Zhengmei) Dear Teacher, Classmates: Hello everyone! Very excited to meet here on the thirtieth anniversary of graduation. Thirty years of time, fleeting, as if the front or military training big