教室里的来客——细致。生动的描写才会感染人

• 作 者: 李锡琴
• 出 处: 小学生(新读写)
• 发表日期: 2012年11期
• 关键词: 徐老师 写作材料 作文课 作文修改 吴雪 王磊 徐来 张雨

又是一节作文课,徐老师评讲完上次的作文,准备布置今天的作文题目了。可她刚一转身,教室里就响起了不寻常的响声。她以为是哪个捣蛋鬼趁她转身朝着黑板的时候,在搞什么小动作,惹起同学们骚动。可等她转回身一看,原来,有一只麻雀飞进了教室。徐老师看到同学们对这“不速之客”的兴奋劲,便灵机一动,放弃了备课时准备的作文题目,对同学们说:“好好观察吧,这次作文就写‘教室里的来客’。”于是,先前还不敢放肆的同学,现在张扬起

It is also a composition class, Xu teacher comment finished the last essay, ready to layout today’s essay topic. But as soon as she turned around, the classroom sounded unusually loud. What she thought was a rascal while she turned toward the blackboard, what tricks, causing the students to commotion. Can wait for her turn around and saw that the original, there is a sparrow flew into the classroom. Xu students to see this “uninvited guest ” excitement, they have the opportunity to move, gave up the lesson preparation essay topic, to the students said: “well observe it, the composition to write ’classroom Visitors’. ”So, previously not dare to presumptuous classmates, now publicity