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传统的作文评语大多公式化、模式化,无形中挫伤了孩子的写作积极性。那么,作文评语究竟要怎么写呢?我想,小学生作文不但是小学生作文能力的体现,也是其在生活实践中的亲身体验。评语不仅应该对学生作文进行评价和指导,更应该对学生的写作心理、道德品质等诸多方面进行引导。因此教师要站在理解、尊重学生的角度,改变以往评语中教师作为说教者的形象,与学生进行平等的对话,耐心的交流,激发学生的写作热情,从而提高学生的素质。教学实践中,我努力从以下三方面入手:1.寻找亮点——鼓励学生“寸有所长”;2.商讨修改——促进学生“百尺竿头更进一步”;3.真诚谈心——帮助学生打开“心结”。
Most of the traditional essay comments are formulated and modeled, thus damaging their writing enthusiasm. So, how to write essay comment how to write it? I think, pupil essay is not only an expression of pupils writing ability, but also in the life experience of personal experience. Commenting should not only evaluate and guide students ’writing, but also guide students’ writing psychology, morality and other aspects. Therefore, teachers should stand on the perspective of understanding and respecting students, change the image of teachers as preachers in previous reviews, conduct equal dialogue and patience with students, stimulate students’ enthusiasm for writing, and improve the quality of students. In teaching practice, I try my best to start with the following three aspects: 1. Looking for bright spots - Encouraging students to have their own strengths; 2. Discussing changes - promoting students to go one step further. Talk in good faith - to help students open “heart knot ”.