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编者推荐:用“他麻利地从裤袋中掏出两个馒头递过去”回应“他两只口袋鼓鼓的——这条不起眼的破裤子里还藏着宝贝”——这两个“馒头”的确是“宝贝”——(“车夫”)在自己很困难的时候不忘帮助比自己更困难的人。最后两个自然段避开“直抒胸臆”;其深沉之情和拓展之意,用意象出之。此文还可锦上添花:标题改为“两个馒头”。此文可变格用于2009年高考全国卷(新课标卷)作文题:将同“两个馒头”相关的事展开写。
Editor’s Choice: “He gently took two buns out of his pocket and handed it over.” “Response” He bulged in both pockets - hidden in this humble pants. “- These two ”breads“ are indeed ”babes“ - (”carter“) who, in their own difficult times, have not forgotten to help more difficult people than themselves. The last two natural paragraphs to avoid ”straight expression chest “; its deep feelings and the meaning of expansion, with the image of the. This article can be icing on the cake: the title changed to ”two buns “. This article can be used to change the format for the 2009 National College Entrance Examination (New Course marking) essay questions: will be with the ”two buns " related to the start of writing.