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作文教学中,常常发现我们的学生掌握了很好的写作素材,但就是写不出一篇好文章。一件感人的事情,三言两语就写完了,读起来却味同嚼蜡。为什么呢?就因为他们没有掌握写作的一个重要的要素:具体。优秀的文章无一不是真实与具体相结合的产物。而我们的学生最容易犯的毛病就是站在旁观者的角度平淡地叙述过程,写事情就像记流水账,很少把自己的感情及对生活的感悟融进去。到
In composition teaching, we often find that our students have a good grasp of the writing material, but they can not write a good essay. A touching thing, a few words to finish, read but taste the same. Why? Just because they did not master an important element of writing: concrete. Excellent articles are all the products of the combination of reality and concrete. The most common mistake our students make is to simply describe the process from the point of view of onlookers. Writing things is like keeping a running account and seldom take their feelings and feelings about life into them. To