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陈传光 男，江苏省连云港市罗阳中学高级教师、连云港市优秀教育园丁、江苏省教育学会会员，从事教育工作15年：曾获英语专业技能大赛市一等奖、班主任基本功大赛市一等奖：有多篇论文在各主流和核心期刊上发表：曾指导学生在各类竞赛中取得了不错的成绩，有多人获得省级奖和地市级奖。
How to Get Along with Others
In our daily life， we can’t avoid associating with people in the world. so it is importantfor us to know how to get along with others.
In my opinion， to get along with others. we must remember the following advices① First，we need to be honest with others. Telling lies surely makes people stay far away from you.Just as an old saying goes， "Honesty is the best policy." Second， we should be modestenough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others② respect. Finally， we shouldn’tbe selfish. We should learn to share.
If we obey the rules which are mentioned above， we will find it much easy③ to get alongwith others.
江蘇省连云港市罗阳中学九年级（2）班
王政
点评
1.优点：
这是一篇表达如何与他人和睦相处的习作。全文主题突出，结构合理，详略得当：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等从句的运用体现了作者较强的写作功底。
2.需要修改的地方：
①advices改为advice。advice意为“建议”，是不可数名词。
②others改为others’。others’意为“其他人的”。
③easy改为easier。much用来修饰比较级。
3.评分：
按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准，本文修改前可得22分。
陈传光 男，江苏省连云港市罗阳中学高级教师、连云港市优秀教育园丁、江苏省教育学会会员，从事教育工作15年：曾获英语专业技能大赛市一等奖、班主任基本功大赛市一等奖：有多篇论文在各主流和核心期刊上发表：曾指导学生在各类竞赛中取得了不错的成绩，有多人获得省级奖和地市级奖。
How to Get Along with Others
In our daily life， we can’t avoid associating with people in the world. so it is importantfor us to know how to get along with others.
In my opinion， to get along with others. we must remember the following advices① First，we need to be honest with others. Telling lies surely makes people stay far away from you.Just as an old saying goes， "Honesty is the best policy." Second， we should be modestenough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others② respect. Finally， we shouldn’tbe selfish. We should learn to share.
If we obey the rules which are mentioned above， we will find it much easy③ to get alongwith others.
江蘇省连云港市罗阳中学九年级（2）班
王政
点评
1.优点：
这是一篇表达如何与他人和睦相处的习作。全文主题突出，结构合理，详略得当：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等从句的运用体现了作者较强的写作功底。
2.需要修改的地方：
①advices改为advice。advice意为“建议”，是不可数名词。
②others改为others’。others’意为“其他人的”。
③easy改为easier。much用来修饰比较级。
3.评分：
按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准，本文修改前可得22分。