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我和你生活在一个美丽的山上[“山上”改为“山脚下”]。那里有高高的树、青青的草、白白的云和一条小河。小河上还有一座小桥。我家在这里开了个杂货店,时而有从桥上经过的村民,顺便来这里买东西。一次,一场大雨把小桥冲垮了。桥上仅剩下几块摇摇晃晃的木板。这下大伙儿可麻烦了。对于小孩儿或空手而过的人,还能勉强从木板上通过,而挑担、背东西等这样[删去“这样”]负重的村民,平时出入就得绕很远的路。
I live with you on a beautiful mountain [“mountain” instead of “mountain”]. There are tall trees, green grass, white clouds and a small river. There is a small bridge on the river. My family opened a grocery store here, and sometimes the villagers who passed by the bridge came here to buy things. Once, a heavy rain washed the bridge down. Only a few rickety wooden boards left on the bridge. This can be troublesome for everyone. Villagers who bear children or go bare hands can barely pass through the planks, and those who bear the weight of carrying such things as backs and worries usually have to go a long way.