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在作文教学中,通常令老师头疼的事是批改学生作文,很多作文要么平淡无奇,一味枯燥地叙述一件事或几件事;要么缺乏具体的描写和深刻的思考,文章空泛,千人一面,作文流于形式,毫无韵味可言;要么在写景状物时过于直白,笔下景物缺乏色彩……这并非是学生完全不了解事物,学生主要是缺乏使语言增色的技巧。如何让作文语言鲜活起来,令描写增色呢?我认为,必须正确指导学生打磨出作文的文采,方能彰显作文神韵!一、精心锤炼词语.力求准确传神作文选用准确、富有表现力的词语,能锦上添
In composition teaching, teachers often headache thing is to modify the student essay, many essay or bland, blindly describe one or several things; or lack of specific description and profound thinking, articles vague, thousands of people On the one hand, the composition is a mere formality with no charm at all; either it is overly straightforward when writing scenery and the scenery is lacking in color. This is not because students have absolutely no understanding of things, and students are mainly lacking in skills that add color to their language. How to let the composition language fresh up, make the description add color? I think, we must correctly guide the students to polish the essay’s literary grace, can reveal the composition charm! A meticulously tempered words, strive to accurately express the composition of the choice of accurate and expressive words , Can be added to Tim