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关联词语在句中的位置,特别是关联词语同主语的先后次序,常常被人们忽视。如: ①老工人的谆谆教导,既使我们懂得了旧社会的黑暗,又明白了新旧社会的幸福。②朱志刚木但以优良成绩完成了本期的学习任务,而且全班也较好地完成了学习任务。这类句子乍看起来,好象没啥问题。若仔细分析一下,就不难看出其中的语病。例①“明白了新社会的幸福”是谁?应该是“我们”。应把“既”字挪在“使我们”之后,或者在“明白了”之前重复“使我们”。例②“不但”放在“朱志刚”的后面,那
The position of related words in a sentence, especially the order of related words and subject, is often overlooked. Such as: 1 The embarrassing teachings of the old workers not only made us understand the darkness of the old society, but also understood the happiness of the old and new society. 2 Zhu Zhigang completed the learning task of this period with excellent results, and the entire class also completed the task of learning. At first glance, this type of sentence seems to have no problem. If you analyze it carefully, it is not difficult to see the language problem. Example 1 “I understand the happiness of the new society” Who should be “We”. The word “both” should be repeated after “make us”, or “make us” before “understand.” Example 2 “Not only” is placed behind “Zhu Zhigang”,