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编者推荐:两次转折,情理之中——“爷爷从口袋里掏出一样东西,轻轻地放在桌上。飞飞顿时傻了眼,这不是墨水吗”和“那支钢笔静静地躺在药里”——由点到面,彰显爱心。结尾“用钢笔给店主写了一封短信”中“用钢笔”三字,回应首段“精美的钢笔”并扣紧标题,显示作者思维品质的周密性。此文可变格于2007年高考全国卷乙卷作文题:将“短信”中的“等我长大了,一定会报答您的”改为“等我长大了,一定会报答社会的”。
Editor’s Choice: Twice turning point, the reason - “Grandpa pulled out something from his pocket, gently on the table .Fly flew immediately stupid, this is not ink?” And “that pen Lying in medicine silently ”- from point to face, showing love. At the end “write a text message to the owner with a pen ” in the “pen”, respond to the first paragraph “fine pen ” and fasten the title, showing the author’s thoughtfulness of the quality of the. This article is subject to change in the 2007 college entrance examination of the national volume B volume essay question: the “SMS ” in the “waiting for me to grow up, will repay your ” to “so I grew up, must Will repay society ”.