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一、相关短语
1. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事对某人很感激
2. be willing to do sth. 乐意做某事
3. be proud of...为……感到骄傲
4. be satisfied with...对……感到满意
5. be disappointed with...对……感到失望
6. be worried about...担心……
7. be concerned about...在乎/担心……
8. be angry with sb. about sth.因某事而生某人的气
9. benefit me a lot让我受益匪浅
10. bring happiness to...给……带来欢乐
11. can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待去做某事
12. lose heart失去信心
13. lose oneself迷失自我
14. make me annoyed让我生气
15. please my parents让父母高兴
16. feel lonely/upset感到孤独/心烦
17. grow up happily快乐地长大
18. express my gratitude to sb.向某人表达我的感激之情
19. have an enormous effect on...对……有巨大的影响
20. keep in touch with...与……保持联系
21. put yourself in his position站在他的角度（考虑）
22. reduce my parents’ burden减轻我父母的负担
23. reward sb. with sth. 用某物报答某人
24. share happiness and sorrows with sb与某人同甘共苦
25. come to realize the importance of...开始意识到…….的重要性
二、必备句型
1. I can well remember there was a time when I felt upset and lost heart in study. 我清楚记得曾经有一段时间我感到很心烦，并且对学习失去信心。
2. It occurs to me that I once had an unforgettable experience of feeling homesick. 我突然想起我曾经有一次难忘的想家经历。
3. In a word，only when we have a good mood can we grow up happily and healthily. 总之，只有当我们有一个好心情，我们才能健康快乐地成长。
4. I was deeply touched and grateful after I knew what my teacher had done for me. 当我了解老师为我所做的一切后，我非常感动和感激。
5. There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious wealth in the world. 毫无疑问快乐是世界上最宝贵的财富。
三、典型例题
例题一：基础写作
假设你是某报社的知心姐姐Kitty，收到一名叫John的中学生来信，他因为太在乎别人对自己的看法而感到苦恼。
[写作内容]
请你给John写一封回信，内容包括：
自身的认识：（1）人无完人，不可能人人都喜欢自己；
（2）活着是为了自己，不是为了别人。
他人的观点：各有所见，有人说三道四是在所难免。
可能的影响：失去自我，心力交瘁。
原 因：背负过多的评论负担。
你的希望：做一个真正的自己，不要生活在别人的世界里。
Dear John，
I feel sorry for your trouble after reading your letter. I hope the following advice may help you...
Best wishes to you.
Sincerely yours，
Sister Kitty
[过程指导]
第一步，认真审题。
1. 审文体：写建议信，是________文。
2. 审时态：以_______________为主。
3. 审人称：以第______人称为主。
4. 审要点：认真看看所提供的建议，以便分组规划。
第二步，信息分组。
根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组，以便用5个句子来表达。（在题中用笔圈出即可）
第三步，信息表达。
以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达，必要时添加恰当的主语等成分，使句子结构完整。
第四步，连句成篇。
将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文，必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。 第五步，检查核对。
第六步，规范誊写。
例题二：读写任务
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
If you are going to lose your memory，which part of your memory that you want to keep？ To me， the moments when I say good-bye to my mom are the most wonderful memories that I want to keep most.
At that moment， I can feel my mom’s gentle eyesight following my departure until I am completely out of her sight. To be frank， these ordinary good-bye moments give me a sense of safety and belonging. Whenever I feel bored and depressed at work， I will think of my mom’s waving hand and smiling face， which remind me that I need to go home to have a stay with mom and taste her dishes. After that， usually I feel refreshed and energetic again.
Over time I have been accustomed to it and become dependent on it. Thanks to the memories， I feel wherever I go or whatever troubles I have， and I just know that home is my eternal sheltering place. I hope I can have these moments engraved in my mind forever.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 用约120个词就“最想留住的记忆”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你最想保留的是什么记忆？
（2）为什么你最想留住这些记忆？
（3）如果没有这些记忆，你会如何？
[过程指导]
写概要
1. 分析文体类别：阅读材料为人生感悟类说明文，作者首先回答自己最想留住的记忆是与母亲说再见的时刻，然后说明想要留住这些记忆的原因，最后说明这些记忆给作者带来的影响。
2. 找出关键词句：写概要前，应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词：
最想留住的记忆：________________________（第一段）
分析原因：______________________________（第二段）
带来的影响：____________________________（第三段）
3. 组合关键词句：_________________________________
谈看法
要点（1）：首先写出主题句：回答我最想留住的记忆是与奶奶一起生活是日子。然后具体描述那时的记忆：尽管父母在外打工我的生活还是无忧无虑，很开心。
要点（2）：首先写出主题句：我想要留住这些记忆的原因是奶奶给我留下深远的影响。然后具体描述什么影响：奶奶虽然是一个普通的农村妇女，但懂得很多人生道理。勤奋、坚持和大度是我从奶奶身上学到的主要性格特征。
要点（3）：首先写出主题句：如果没有这些记忆，我想我在学习上不会那么自信和专注。然后再提出这些记忆带来的启发：世上无难事，只怕有心人。
根据以下提示，完成自己的写作：
四、模拟演练
练习一：基础写作
最近，我们就“有心事时是否愿意与父母讲”这个问题，在高一171名学生当中进行了调查。
[写作内容]
请根据以下调查结果写一篇英语短文。
价值观 outlook of value人生观 outlook or life
Recently， we have conducted a survey among 171 Senior One students as to the issue whether you will tell your parents about your annoyances.
练习二：读写任务
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
When I was a high school student， I didn’t understand why my parents always told my neighbors about my achievements at school， which made me feel embarrassed and uncomfortable because my neighbors’ congratulations were too exaggerating. Usually， I would complain to my parents about this， asking them to keep a low profile（低调）， not telling others any more because I just wanted to share my happiness with them. Besides， I guessed my neighbors would misunderstand that my parents liked to show off. However， it turned out that my complaint and ask were always in vain（徒劳）.
It was not until I entered university that I just figured out one important truth that sharing happiness is able to get the most of happiness. From then on， I would try my best to work hard and share my achievements with my parents because their utmost happiness is my greatest happiness.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 用约120个词就“分享快乐才能让快乐最大化”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你是否同意这一说法并说明理由；
（2）用你或他人的经历说明；
（3）呼吁大家学会分享快乐，让快乐最大化。
（作者单位：河源市东源附城中学）
1. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事对某人很感激
2. be willing to do sth. 乐意做某事
3. be proud of...为……感到骄傲
4. be satisfied with...对……感到满意
5. be disappointed with...对……感到失望
6. be worried about...担心……
7. be concerned about...在乎/担心……
8. be angry with sb. about sth.因某事而生某人的气
9. benefit me a lot让我受益匪浅
10. bring happiness to...给……带来欢乐
11. can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待去做某事
12. lose heart失去信心
13. lose oneself迷失自我
14. make me annoyed让我生气
15. please my parents让父母高兴
16. feel lonely/upset感到孤独/心烦
17. grow up happily快乐地长大
18. express my gratitude to sb.向某人表达我的感激之情
19. have an enormous effect on...对……有巨大的影响
20. keep in touch with...与……保持联系
21. put yourself in his position站在他的角度（考虑）
22. reduce my parents’ burden减轻我父母的负担
23. reward sb. with sth. 用某物报答某人
24. share happiness and sorrows with sb与某人同甘共苦
25. come to realize the importance of...开始意识到…….的重要性
二、必备句型
1. I can well remember there was a time when I felt upset and lost heart in study. 我清楚记得曾经有一段时间我感到很心烦，并且对学习失去信心。
2. It occurs to me that I once had an unforgettable experience of feeling homesick. 我突然想起我曾经有一次难忘的想家经历。
3. In a word，only when we have a good mood can we grow up happily and healthily. 总之，只有当我们有一个好心情，我们才能健康快乐地成长。
4. I was deeply touched and grateful after I knew what my teacher had done for me. 当我了解老师为我所做的一切后，我非常感动和感激。
5. There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious wealth in the world. 毫无疑问快乐是世界上最宝贵的财富。
三、典型例题
例题一：基础写作
假设你是某报社的知心姐姐Kitty，收到一名叫John的中学生来信，他因为太在乎别人对自己的看法而感到苦恼。
[写作内容]
请你给John写一封回信，内容包括：
自身的认识：（1）人无完人，不可能人人都喜欢自己；
（2）活着是为了自己，不是为了别人。
他人的观点：各有所见，有人说三道四是在所难免。
可能的影响：失去自我，心力交瘁。
原 因：背负过多的评论负担。
你的希望：做一个真正的自己，不要生活在别人的世界里。
Dear John，
I feel sorry for your trouble after reading your letter. I hope the following advice may help you...
Best wishes to you.
Sincerely yours，
Sister Kitty
[过程指导]
第一步，认真审题。
1. 审文体：写建议信，是________文。
2. 审时态：以_______________为主。
3. 审人称：以第______人称为主。
4. 审要点：认真看看所提供的建议，以便分组规划。
第二步，信息分组。
根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组，以便用5个句子来表达。（在题中用笔圈出即可）
第三步，信息表达。
以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达，必要时添加恰当的主语等成分，使句子结构完整。
第四步，连句成篇。
将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文，必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。 第五步，检查核对。
第六步，规范誊写。
例题二：读写任务
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
If you are going to lose your memory，which part of your memory that you want to keep？ To me， the moments when I say good-bye to my mom are the most wonderful memories that I want to keep most.
At that moment， I can feel my mom’s gentle eyesight following my departure until I am completely out of her sight. To be frank， these ordinary good-bye moments give me a sense of safety and belonging. Whenever I feel bored and depressed at work， I will think of my mom’s waving hand and smiling face， which remind me that I need to go home to have a stay with mom and taste her dishes. After that， usually I feel refreshed and energetic again.
Over time I have been accustomed to it and become dependent on it. Thanks to the memories， I feel wherever I go or whatever troubles I have， and I just know that home is my eternal sheltering place. I hope I can have these moments engraved in my mind forever.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 用约120个词就“最想留住的记忆”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你最想保留的是什么记忆？
（2）为什么你最想留住这些记忆？
（3）如果没有这些记忆，你会如何？
[过程指导]
写概要
1. 分析文体类别：阅读材料为人生感悟类说明文，作者首先回答自己最想留住的记忆是与母亲说再见的时刻，然后说明想要留住这些记忆的原因，最后说明这些记忆给作者带来的影响。
2. 找出关键词句：写概要前，应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词：
最想留住的记忆：________________________（第一段）
分析原因：______________________________（第二段）
带来的影响：____________________________（第三段）
3. 组合关键词句：_________________________________
谈看法
要点（1）：首先写出主题句：回答我最想留住的记忆是与奶奶一起生活是日子。然后具体描述那时的记忆：尽管父母在外打工我的生活还是无忧无虑，很开心。
要点（2）：首先写出主题句：我想要留住这些记忆的原因是奶奶给我留下深远的影响。然后具体描述什么影响：奶奶虽然是一个普通的农村妇女，但懂得很多人生道理。勤奋、坚持和大度是我从奶奶身上学到的主要性格特征。
要点（3）：首先写出主题句：如果没有这些记忆，我想我在学习上不会那么自信和专注。然后再提出这些记忆带来的启发：世上无难事，只怕有心人。
根据以下提示，完成自己的写作：
四、模拟演练
练习一：基础写作
最近，我们就“有心事时是否愿意与父母讲”这个问题，在高一171名学生当中进行了调查。
[写作内容]
请根据以下调查结果写一篇英语短文。
价值观 outlook of value人生观 outlook or life
Recently， we have conducted a survey among 171 Senior One students as to the issue whether you will tell your parents about your annoyances.
练习二：读写任务
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
When I was a high school student， I didn’t understand why my parents always told my neighbors about my achievements at school， which made me feel embarrassed and uncomfortable because my neighbors’ congratulations were too exaggerating. Usually， I would complain to my parents about this， asking them to keep a low profile（低调）， not telling others any more because I just wanted to share my happiness with them. Besides， I guessed my neighbors would misunderstand that my parents liked to show off. However， it turned out that my complaint and ask were always in vain（徒劳）.
It was not until I entered university that I just figured out one important truth that sharing happiness is able to get the most of happiness. From then on， I would try my best to work hard and share my achievements with my parents because their utmost happiness is my greatest happiness.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 用约120个词就“分享快乐才能让快乐最大化”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你是否同意这一说法并说明理由；
（2）用你或他人的经历说明；
（3）呼吁大家学会分享快乐，让快乐最大化。
（作者单位：河源市东源附城中学）