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不少同学给《学苑创造》编辑部写信求助:“一阳,老师总是批评我的作文毛病太多,可是我读来读去也不知道毛病在哪,更不知道该怎么改,您能帮帮我吗?”针对同学们提出的各种困惑,一阳特地为大家请来了“超级作文病毒整治专家”——来自南宁市黄献英特级教师工作室的Mr.许,让他专门为大家治各种“写作文难,改作文更难”的疑难病症!这不,第一位病文患者就前来求治啦……
Many of my classmates wrote letters to the editorial department of “Academy Creation” for help: “A teacher always criticizes me for having too many essays. However, I do not know where the problems lie, but I do not know how to change it. Can you help me? ”“ For the various puzzles put forward by the students, a special offer for everyone invited ”super composition virus remediation experts “ - Mr. Xu from Nanning City Huang Xian-ying special class teacher’s studio, Let him treat everyone for a variety of ”difficult writing essay, writing more difficult," the difficult illness! This is not the first patient to seek medical treatment disease ... ...