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冯渊老师在评析2015年上海高考语文试题时指出,高考作文欠缺的是思维。笔者批阅我校“二模”考试议论文“享受孤独”后,对此“心有戚戚焉”。按照元代文人乔梦符提出的一篇优秀文章必须具备漂亮的“凤头”、充实的“猪肚”、有力的“豹尾”三个特点的要求来审视,笔者试着谈谈自己的一些体会。一、不切合中心的“漂亮、精彩”的开头请看原文(括号里是改文)。人生是首歌,就算没有人为你伴奏也要唱完(为你喝彩,你也不要因此而备感失落,而要在体味这一孤独中把它唱完);人生是支舞,就算没有人陪你跳也要跳完(欣赏你,你也不要因此而深感孤单,而要在品尝这一孤
Feng Yuan teacher commenting on the 2015 Shanghai entrance examination of Chinese language pointed out that the lack of writing college entrance examination is thinking. After the author has read my school “two mode ” exam essay “enjoy loneliness ”, this “heart has Qi ”. According to an excellent article proposed by the literati Joe Mengfu of the Yuan Dynasty, we must examine the requirements of the three distinctive features of “Crested Cat”, “Pork Belly”, and “Leopard Tail” Try to talk about some of my own experiences. First, do not meet the center “beautiful, wonderful ” at the beginning, please see the original text (brackets are changed text). Life is the song, even if no one accompanies you have to sing (for you applause, you do not feel frustrated, but in the taste of this lonely finish it); life is dance, even if no one You need to skip the dance (to appreciate you, you do not feel so lonely, but to taste this one