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有些同学写作文,选定了所写的事例后,往往刚写上三两句就感到没什么可写的了。出现这种现象的原因当然很多,下面我们以课文《董存瑞舍身炸暗堡》为例,来谈一谈作文中的交代与铺垫,也许可以帮助同学们解决作文中“无话可说”的难题。如果让某个同学来写董存瑞炸暗堡,他很可能这样写:董存瑞拿起炸药包,在战友的掩护下冲到暗堡下。由于找不到适合的位置放炸药包,他便一手托起炸药包,一手拉燃了导火索,终于炸掉了暗堡。实事求是地说,乍看起来,这六十多个字真的已经将董存瑞舍身炸暗堡这件事
Some students write essay, selected the case has been written, often just wrote three or two on the feel nothing to write. There are many reasons for this phenomenon. Let us take the text “Dong Cunrui Shenshen Fortress” as an example to talk about the confrontation and bedding in the composition, which may help students to solve the problem of “nothing to say” in the composition. If a classmate is allowed to write Dong Cunrui, he may very well write: Dong Cunrui picked up the explosives bag and rushed to the dark fort under the cover of his comrade in arms. Since he could not find a suitable place to put a dynamite bag, he held up his dynamite bag in one hand and burned the fuse with one hand and finally burst the dark fort. To be realistic, at first glance, it seems that these 60 words really have dumped Dong Cunrui into a dark fort