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三年级第一次作文课上,朱老师让我们以《谢谢您,老师》这个题目写一篇作文。我托着腮,像放电影一样把听到的和从书上看到的这一类作文在脑袋里过了一遍,然后就动笔编了起来:“晚上,我回到教室拿我忘带的茶杯,路过老师办公室时,看到里面的灯还亮着。此时,虽然夜已经很深了,但老师还在一丝不苟地批改着作业,似乎忘记了时间、饥饿、疲劳……”我一气呵成,写完后,又边读边修改了几遍,自以为写得很流畅,心里很有些洋洋得意。谁
Third grade first composition class, Zhu teacher let us “thank you, teacher” to write an essay on the subject. I put on my cheek, put the kind of essay I heard and read from the book in my head like a movie, and I wrote it: "In the evening, I went back to the classroom and took me to forget Of the cup, passing the teacher’s office, I saw the light is still bright at this time, although the night has been very deep, but the teacher is still meticulously revised homework, it seems that forgot the time, hunger, fatigue ... In one go, after writing, but also modify the side while reading several times, I thought very smooth writing, my heart is very polite. Who